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Chapter 12 Page 36

December 19th, 2017, 4:57 pm

Average Rating: 5.00
I guess Fairs really do kinda suck. A gentle breeze would obliterate one.
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Author's Comments:

Reply H0lyhandgrenade, December 5th, 2017, 4:59 pm

Hmmmmmmmm...

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User's Comments:

Reply Star Noble, December 5th, 2017, 6:25 pm

Wait...whaaat??? That shadow person isn't Toby! They have a hood on. Is it Rumple begin beat up?! Is he okay??? AAHHAGH!!

Reply HVoice, December 6th, 2017, 10:50 pm

Ooooohhoho.
I've got a hunch on whats going on, but I won't say anything. ;)

Reply Vapor (Guest), December 7th, 2017, 9:55 pm

OMG, is Toby ALIVE?!?!?! 8D Eeeeeeeeeee!

Reply Lightseed, December 19th, 2017, 5:06 pm

*Double takes*

Err... did I miss something...? What!?

I am a tad confused... but who cares? This is still exciting!

Reply H0lyhandgrenade, December 19th, 2017, 5:22 pm

@Lightseed: Don't worry, I wrote this scene with the knowledge that it'd probably be confusing to many. Looking back later it should hopefully make sense :>

Reply Confused (Guest), December 20th, 2017, 4:41 am

@H0lyhandgrenade: First time I've commented, but I just thought I should say, I've been very confused for ages. I honestly slightly lost the plot after the timeskip? I thought I had a handle on it again briefly, but then I had no idea what was going on again.

I really like the idea of this comic, but I'm very confused.

Might just be me though. I'd love some more author comments to help clarify things though. I honestly don't even have any idea when this is happening. Nor what is happening in 'present time'

Reply H0lyhandgrenade, December 20th, 2017, 9:01 am

@Confused: Sure, I don't mind clearing things up a little. I think it's confusing because updates are so drawn out, and so it's easy to forget things, especially when it's a complicated scene anyway. I'm not surprised that anyone would be having trouble with it.

At the end of the last chapter if you recall, there was a lot of concern for the prospect of Gabe being stolen, and then it appears that that is what happened. Then at the start of this chapter we went back to see what happened on the night of the fire, ending with Chris being taken away. Then we came back to the present, following what we saw at the end of the last chapter- Gabe being taken away, the masked man escaping with him. The King had assured Chris that he was prepared for this though, and as much as he didn't think it was a true threat, he was stationing his men EVERYWHERE just in case.

So we left off Toby chasing a Fair in the past, while in the present one of the King's men is chasing a Fair in the present. And in this current scene the two times are muddled, we see both what happened than and is happening now. And they're not so different.

I can't blame it all on the slow updates, it's probably down to me too xD; But I hope it's more clear for anyone reading through in one go, and I hope this cleared things up a little for you =)

Reply Lightseed, December 20th, 2017, 1:32 pm

@H0lyhandgrenade: Thank you. Sorry for the flip out.Love this story so far, btw.

Reply H0lyhandgrenade, December 20th, 2017, 1:36 pm

@Lightseed: Hey no worries! It's good for me to know if things aren't very clear. Glad you're still enjoying it ^^

Reply Riverfox237 (Guest), December 20th, 2017, 3:00 pm

I feel, just, REALLY super certain that that's his dad. I mean at the very least Toby recognizes him. Also pretty durned certain that Toby is the masked guy which WOULD THRILL MY SOUL

Reply chaos-of-vinnie, January 7th, 2018, 3:18 pm

Ohhh shiiiit. Punch to the face and back of head!

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